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At first, Dalinar threw himself into the fighting against the Parshendi with abandon, his guilt driving him. But as his grief faded, so did his thirst for battle and war. Dalinar and the Kholin warcamp followed the Codes when no other Alethi highprince would. He studied the words of [[Nohadon]], the author of ''The Way of Kings'', convinced that he must now become an example to Alethkar and lead them towards peace and honor.
 
At first, Dalinar threw himself into the fighting against the Parshendi with abandon, his guilt driving him. But as his grief faded, so did his thirst for battle and war. Dalinar and the Kholin warcamp followed the Codes when no other Alethi highprince would. He studied the words of [[Nohadon]], the author of ''The Way of Kings'', convinced that he must now become an example to Alethkar and lead them towards peace and honor.
   
At the same time, Dalinar began having fits during every [[highstorm]]. During these fits, Dalinar lost awareness of his surroundings, experiencing visions of the past as though he were living them himself. The visions seemed to be from the [[Almighty]],{{book ref|sa1|12}} leading Dalinar to believe that God was telling him to unite the Alethi Highprinces. In most of these visions, the [[Knights Radiant]] were present. This loss of awareness was frightening by itself, but seeing the Radiants as heroes was disturbing to Dalinar and his family. The Kholins kept Dalinar separate from others during highstorms, not willing to let others see him during these fits.
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At the same time, Dalinar began having fits during every [[highstorm]]. During these fits, Dalinar lost awareness of his surroundings, experiencing visions of the past as though he were living them himself. The visions seemed to be from the Almighty,{{book ref|sa1|12}} leading Dalinar to believe that God was telling him to unite the Alethi highprinces. In most of these visions, the [[Knights Radiant]] were present. This loss of awareness was frightening by itself, but seeing the Radiants as heroes was disturbing to Dalinar and his family. The Kholins kept Dalinar separate from others during highstorms, not willing to let others see him during these fits.
   
Men began to speak of Dalinar the same way they'd spoken of Gavilar later in his life, namely that he was becoming weak and feeble despite Dalinar's history as a terrifying force on the battlefield as the Blackthorn. The rumors of his madness during the storms combined with his strange obsession with the teachings of ''The Way of Kings'' lost Dalinar a lot of respect and influence among his peers.
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Men began to speak of Dalinar the same way they'd spoken of Gavilar later in his life, namely that he was becoming weak and feeble despite Dalinar's history as a terrifying force on the battlefield as the Blackthorn. The rumors of his madness during the storms combined with his strange obsession with the teachings of ''The Way of Kings'' lost Dalinar a lot of respect and influence among his peers.
   
 
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