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She was born under a falling star, which was seen as an omen of her powers as a yoki-hijo and thus she was taken from her parents and raised as one her whole life{{book ref|yumi|2}}, and eventually became renowned for her abilities. This, however, was until the [[father machine]] was activated in an attempt to replace the position, as it was perceived as more efficient. The activation was a disaster however, and nearly everyone on the planet had their souls consumed by the machine, with her being one of the only survivors.
 
She was born under a falling star, which was seen as an omen of her powers as a yoki-hijo and thus she was taken from her parents and raised as one her whole life{{book ref|yumi|2}}, and eventually became renowned for her abilities. This, however, was until the [[father machine]] was activated in an attempt to replace the position, as it was perceived as more efficient. The activation was a disaster however, and nearly everyone on the planet had their souls consumed by the machine, with her being one of the only survivors.
   
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The machine, threatened by her, decided to hide her away in a simulation of her former life, hidden away in the [[shroud]], in order to keep her complacent. At the end of every day, she would have her memory of the day erased, so that she would live through it again. This happened for one-thousand seven-hundred and sixty-three years,{{book ref|yumi|38}} until one day her ritual reached its apex, summoning thirty-seven hijo at once, and managed to pull one spirit from the grasp of the machine. Shortly after giving them out, she passed out in exhaustion.{{book ref|yumi|2}}{{book ref|yumi|39}}
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The machine, threatened by her, decided to hide her away in a simulation of her former life, hidden away in the [[shroud]], in order to keep her complacent. At the end of every day, she would have her memory of the day erased, so that she would live through it again. This happened for one-thousand seven-hundred and sixty-three years,{{book ref|yumi|38}} until one day her ritual reached its apex, summoning thirty-seven hijo at once, and managed to pull one spirit from the grasp of the machine. Shortly aftering giving them out, she passed out in exhaustion.{{book ref|yumi|2}}{{book ref|yumi|39}}
   
 
{{image|Thirty Seven Spirits by Aliya Chen.jpg|width=300px|side=right|Yumi passed out after a day of summoning}}
 
{{image|Thirty Seven Spirits by Aliya Chen.jpg|width=300px|side=right|Yumi passed out after a day of summoning}}

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