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Kai begins the tale of how he met Melhi, thirty years ago. It was in a [[State#Border States|Border State]], which at the time Kai had very little experience with. He brought a full legion with him, fifty thousand men, because he didn't know what to expect. Kai soon finds out that two other Liveborn have access to the Border State as well. He also learns that the State has two very valuable resources; a spice that turns those who consume it into great warriors, and a metal that can cut through steel. Kai has thoughts about how it seems too convenient that he discovers such a Border State only after having conquered his own State.
 
Kai begins the tale of how he met Melhi, thirty years ago. It was in a [[State#Border States|Border State]], which at the time Kai had very little experience with. He brought a full legion with him, fifty thousand men, because he didn't know what to expect. Kai soon finds out that two other Liveborn have access to the Border State as well. He also learns that the State has two very valuable resources; a spice that turns those who consume it into great warriors, and a metal that can cut through steel. Kai has thoughts about how it seems too convenient that he discovers such a Border State only after having conquered his own State.
   
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When they come across the natives, Kai learns that the other Liveborn and he are to compete for the loyalty and resources of the Border State, a concept that excites Kai because he's never competed against another Liveborn before. Kai agrees to meet with the other Liveborn, which would turn out to be Melhi, and is led into the native's village.
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When they come across the natives, Kai learns that the other Liveborn and he are to compete for the loyalty and resources of the Border State, a concept that excites Kai because he's never defeated another Liveborn before. Kai agrees to meet with the other Liveborn, which would turn out to be Melhi, and is led into the native's village.
   
 
== Chapter 5 ==
 
== Chapter 5 ==

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