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== Chapter 2 ==
 
== Chapter 2 ==
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Kai arrives in [[Maltese]] and gets sucked into a game of paintball.
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Kai arrives in [[Maltese]], the Communal State he is to meet his date in. Maltese is a State that has trains, cars, and handguns. There is also some future technology that the State has been introduced to. Suffering from some very mild culture shock, Kai is alarmed when a firearm goes off nearby. Rushing to the source of the noise, Kai steps into a confrontation between a group of men and two young women, one of whom is on the ground and seems to be bleeding. Kai engages the men with his own handgun, attempting to rescue the woman left standing.
 
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The woman turns on Kai, trying to shoot him, so he shoots her back, hitting her in the chest. He then ditches his handgun for a metal rod to use as a sword, and attacks the men, breaking one of their hands. The men stop Kai, and the women get up, revealing that it was all a game of paintball between Liveborn. Kai leaves for the restaurant that his date is supposed to meet him at after being the brunt of some jokes.
 
   
 
== Chapter 3 ==
 
== Chapter 3 ==

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