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'''Allomancer Jak and the Pits of Eltania''' is a short story about an adventuring Allomancer named [[Jak]], as told by him and edited by his [[Terrisman]] steward, [[Handerwym]]. Handerwym's annotations imply that the narrator is unreliable (prone to exaggeration and ignorance), but we do find out some information about [[koloss]] society post-[[Catacendre]].
 
== Publishing ==
It was originally published with the [[Alloy of Law (rule book)|''Alloy of Law'' rule book]], an extension of the [[Mistborn Adventure Game]]. It was later released in part on Sanderson's website.{{bws ref|allomancer-jak-and-the-pits-of-eltania|Allomancer Jak|date=2014-08-07}} It was also included in ''[[Arcanum Unbounded]]'' with an additional afterword.{{cite}}
 
== Summary ==
The story starts with Jak waking up in a cave, out of metals. He then escapes the cave by wayjumping ofinto the waterriver in the canyon below after licking ana aluminumtin deposit on the wall of the cave. He thenis encounterspromptly recaptured by the Kolosskoloss who want to make him their leader and a Kolosskoloss. He discovers that his girlfriend is[[Elizandra KolossDramali]] is koloss-blooded. He does not want to become a Kolosskoloss, so he says that he is already ais Kolossone and will prove it by getting the Survivor's treasure from the bottom of a lakespear-shaped that has itpool. He dives down, and finds a chest, and takesbrings it outback up. It contains a lotnumber of Aluminumkoloss [[Hemalurgy|spikes]]. The koloss are so excited to have new spikes to increase their numbers, Jak and heElizandra leavesmanage to escape, and Jak realizes that the Kolosschest itself is made of precious [[aluminum]].{{cite}}
 
== Postscript ==
''Note: the Postscript is found in [[Arcanum Unbounded]], a collection of Cosmere stories.''
 
This story is inspired by an idea of [[Brandon Sanderson|Brandon's]] brother Jordan, who wanted to do a radio drama, scripted by Brandon. The character Jak is meant to be in contrast to the more genuine, serious character of [[Waxillium Ladrian|Wax]], like the Adam West [[Wikipedia:Batman (TV series)|Batman]] versus the current Batman. Unlike [[The Eleventh Metal]], this story is meant for established readers of the [[Mistborn series]], revealing how Koloss are made in the post-[[Catacendre]] era.
 
== Publication History ==
It was originally published with the [[Mistborn Adventure Game]]'s extension [[Alloy of Law (rule book)|''Alloy of Law'']]. The short story is described as parts 28-30, although it's meant to be read on its own. The first 27 parts weren't published, except for one small unnumbered piece in The Elendel Daily Broadsheet{{file ref|Elendel Daily broadsheet.png|''The Elendel Daily'' Broadsheet}} that was included in the novel ''[[The Alloy of Law]]''. Later books in the Mistborn series include broadsheets that have other unrelated references to Jak.
 
It was originally published with the [[Alloy of Law (rule book)|''Alloy of Law'' rule book]], an extension of the [[Mistborn Adventure Game]]. It was later released in part on Sanderson's website.{{bws ref|allomancer-jak-and-the-pits-of-eltania|Allomancer Jak|date=2014-08-07}} It was also included in ''[[Arcanum Unbounded]]'' with an additional afterword.{{cite}}
 
== Statistical Analysis ==
''Allomancer Jak and the Pits of Eltania'' consists of 7,047 words split between a narrative and various footnotes.
 
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! Narrative Word Count
| style="text-align:center" | 5,322
|-
! Footnotes Word Count
| style="text-align:center" | 1,725
|-
! Total Word Count
| style="text-align:center" | 7,047
|}
 
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